Pigs on the Beach
There seems to be a story here.
Writing: A scene and a story is build in layers. There is what is seen and heard (think play), the second is what the characters feel and experience emotionally. And third, never to be forgotten is the plot (where the scene is going.)
Its the plot that's the toughie.
ReplyDeleteBy the way, why on earth are there pigs on a beach? Is it the Bay of Pigs;)
wild pigs are becoming a problem in Florida.
ReplyDeleteAhhhh yes. Plot. I always forget about plot! :)
ReplyDeleteI cannot believe you posted a live animal on your blog!